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The Salvation of Mercy

December 16, 2012
By TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Here is a small fact: You are going to die.&quot; ~The Book Thief<br /> &quot;You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self.&quot; ~Mikey Pasterik


Can’t breathe,
Mercy, please,
When will they see?
Where is salvation?
There is no love, no victory.
I do not feel; I do not see.
Thus, it must not exist.
Purple lips,
Heavy breathing,
Pulling out the knife, I am ashamed.
No one must see.
Defeated,
They will inquire; I will lie.
Where is salvation?
The pain is welcomed.
Breathe, focus, deeper,
No one must see.
Mercy, please.



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on Apr. 23 2013 at 8:23 am
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Here is a small fact: You are going to die.&quot; ~The Book Thief<br /> &quot;You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self.&quot; ~Mikey Pasterik

the ADD and choppy flow was intentional. it has a lot of symbolism and meaning behind it, but it is hard to see.  thanks for your feedback!! God Bless :D 

on Apr. 20 2013 at 11:00 pm
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who&#039;ll decide where to go...&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You&#039;ll Go!

A little ADD. It has some good ideas in it, but the flow is kinda choppy. I like the thought, though.