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Do I Dare to Ask?

February 13, 2012
By RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.<br /> &mdash;Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

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Roses are red,
And violets are blue.
Movies make me smile,
And so do you.
You make me laugh,
And it's a struggle not to let it show.
The reason why is a mystery;
I just don't want you to know.
Another mystery,
Is why I'm so nervous when you're around.
Maybe I'm afraid to mess up,
So I can barely make a sound.
Time is running out,
And I must makie this dangerous decision of mine.
So do I dare to ask,
"Will you be my Valentine?"

© Julia K., Old Tappan, NJ

The author's comments:
I wrote this for a boy that I have a crush on at school, but I doubt that I'll ever be able to give it to him. Maybe I'll stick it on the front of his locker. Either way, tell me what you think. Good? Bad? Cheesy? I don't care what you have to say, just say it.
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spency SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 9:12 pm
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
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&quot;DON&#039;T GIVE UP,REACH YOURSELF UP&quot;

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OMG,im loving this,good work
RedFeather GOLD said...
on Mar. 7 2012 at 7:22 am
RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.<br /> &mdash;Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

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Thanks a million - to all of you. I'm just really glad to get any kind of  feedback at all on my poems. I'm really glad that I took the time to write this. Too bad that the person I wrote it for turned out to be such a jerk.

Oh well, any experience that I get a good poem out of has to be worth it.

FutureSceneQueen BRONZE said...
on Mar. 6 2012 at 3:18 pm
FutureSceneQueen BRONZE, Amherst, Ohio
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Do what you love or die unhappy -m.shadows from avenged sevenfold

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This is SO cute! i love this. a lot of people could relate too :-)
thezebrasgray PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 17 2012 at 11:22 am
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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Very good! You did a great job with it!
savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 16 2012 at 7:40 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

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Well the only thing I can tell you is love favors the bold. He'll never know if don't tell him. :)
RedFeather GOLD said...
on Feb. 16 2012 at 7:20 am
RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.<br /> &mdash;Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

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Yeah, I was going to, but somebody gave my friend a note to give to me asking me the same thing, so I didn't (but this same someone chickened out when I went to talk to him and claimed that he didn't write it.) But there's always next year I guess. Yeah I'm a girl, but I guess it is kinda hard to tell when your screenname doesn't include the words chic, girl, boy, or such. That's the frustrating thing about websites like this. You meet alot of other people who share your interest/passion for writing, but you don't know much else about them.
savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 15 2012 at 8:38 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

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Dude, so cute! You should've put it in the front of his locker Valentine's Day and have it be from a secret admirer. :) I didn't even know you were a girl.