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Time of the Past (Moving on)

December 25, 2011
By FinalStraw94 SILVER, Everett, Washington
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FinalStraw94 SILVER, Everett, Washington
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Life is a dream that you don't wake up from. -Zachary Skurlock

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Me driving down the road,
See you in my rearview,
I’m not coming back.

I’m moving on with my life,
Looking towards my future,
Me driving down the road

A beautiful memory,
My Final goodbye,
See you in my rearview

My life is not finished,
Gunna find some on new,
I’m not coming back

© Michael D, Phoenix, AZ

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This Peom represnts having to forget someone that you have loved and having to just say goodbye.
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Kassity SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 10:06 pm
Kassity SILVER, Lansing, Michigan
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Not all scars show, not all wounds heal, sometimes you cant always see, the pain someone feels.

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i love it. i feel the pain but also the hopefulness for the future.
Twatler27 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 10:06 pm
Twatler27 BRONZE, Haverhill, Massachusetts
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“And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music.” - Friedrich Nietzsche

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Good work, concise, but well said, and it flows nicely! 
raeee GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2012 at 12:09 pm
raeee GOLD, Walla Walla, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Would she hear me if I called her name? Would she hold me if she knew my shame? Would she even love me if I was to blame?" -Favourite poem ever♥

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I feel the sorrow, and the pain of leaving the loved one behind, but I also feel the hopefulness and the joy in the future. All in all, wonderful piece.