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Milk Chocolate Stars

November 11, 2011
By KaylaKewlKat93 SILVER, Burlington, North Carolina
KaylaKewlKat93 SILVER, Burlington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I give myself very good advice,<br /> But I very seldom follow it,<br /> That explains the trouble that I&#039;m always in,<br /> Be patient, is very good advice,<br /> But the waiting makes me curious,<br /> And I&#039;d love the change,<br /> Should something strange begin,<br /> Well I went along my merry way,<br /> And I never stopped to reason,<br /> I should have know there&#039;d be a price to pay,<br /> Someday...someday,<br /> I give myself very good advice,<br /> But I very seldom follow it,<br /> Will I ever learn to do the things I should?<br /> Will I ever learn to do the things I should?


Milk chocolate stars
unravel from their aluminum home
and shower the earth’s tongue
with their core’s tiny domes

A core holding caramel
as thick as tree sap
River of goo coursing through the land
acting as a map

A map guiding the way
through the wild nuget thickets
Back into your arms
Heartbeats in time with the crickets

Laying under these freckles
of God’s mysterious magic with you
I cannot help but question
If you’re following the caramel river too



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on Nov. 22 2011 at 8:23 pm
fineartsismypassion BRONZE, Maumee, Ohio
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I really liked the details in this and the mystery affect it has. good job!