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Ribbons of Pain

July 7, 2011
By _Maddieb PLATINUM, Carlisle, Ohio
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How will you ever reach the stars ; if you're too afraid to try.

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Lost in a world,
Where you don't belong.
Trying to do well,
Trying to be strong.

Faces are vague,
Happiness seems to leave.
Wishing for some hope,
Something to believe.

Yesterdays memories,
Seem to be tied.
With ribbons of pain,
Tears that you've cried.

Trying to hold on,
To anything you love.
Trying not to drown,
Tryng to stay above.

© Caroline C., Coronado, CA

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_Maddieb PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 28 2011 at 11:32 pm
_Maddieb PLATINUM, Carlisle, Ohio
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I haven't even been on in forever.
Alice_C SILVER said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 1:11 pm
Alice_C SILVER, Edgewood, Iowa
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We all have dark secrets, just no one knows them.- Me<br /> &quot;If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be.&quot;-unknown

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I'm still working on it but I've been kinda busy.
_Maddieb PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 10:38 pm
_Maddieb PLATINUM, Carlisle, Ohio
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thank  you (:
_Maddieb PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 10:31 pm
_Maddieb PLATINUM, Carlisle, Ohio
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Hahah thank you so so much. I've actually stopped writing. Writing block I suppose. I'm going to try and start writing more (:
Garnet77 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 1:09 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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&quot;Everything&#039;s a triangle.&quot; ~ My mother<br /> <br /> &quot;Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it&#039;s the easiest way to be heard.&quot;

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Wow. This is really, really good. Your style is so simple and wonderful at the same time. I love your word choice--this is so sad!! But it's also beautiful. I really love this, and I could rant on and on about how much I like this, but I think I'll just favorite this instead. Keep writing!!! :)
Alice_C SILVER said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 12:45 pm
Alice_C SILVER, Edgewood, Iowa
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We all have dark secrets, just no one knows them.- Me<br /> &quot;If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be.&quot;-unknown

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of course i will
_Maddieb PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 2:28 am
_Maddieb PLATINUM, Carlisle, Ohio
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Keep me updated? (:
_Maddieb PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 2:27 am
_Maddieb PLATINUM, Carlisle, Ohio
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haha well ; sure. (:
Alice_C SILVER said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 11:18 pm
Alice_C SILVER, Edgewood, Iowa
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We all have dark secrets, just no one knows them.- Me<br /> &quot;If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be.&quot;-unknown

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Wow this can be lyrics to a song. Can I try to make it into it? I would give you credit.