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Winter

December 6, 2010
By DanniLynn SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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DanniLynn SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"A penny for my thoughts, oh no, I'll sell them for a dollar, they're worth so much more after i'm a goner, and maybe then you'll hear the words I been singinm funny when your dead how people start listenin,"- The Band Perry

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Winter
Sitting cozily in front of the fireplace under a funny blanket
Sipping steamy hot chocolate,
Looking out the window at the film of white flakes blowing around,
The winds faintly whistling through the crack of the door,
A mom of two little girls,
Telling them stories of when she was their age,
Mom and daughters
Cozy,
Comfy,
Happy.

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batman said...
on Feb. 14 2012 at 5:11 pm
this one reminds me of when i was little and my grama used to tell me stories :)
DanniLynn SILVER said...
on Feb. 14 2012 at 5:59 am
DanniLynn SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
6 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A penny for my thoughts, oh no, I'll sell them for a dollar, they're worth so much more after i'm a goner, and maybe then you'll hear the words I been singinm funny when your dead how people start listenin,"- The Band Perry

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My classmate posted this one for me last year and made that typo. It was supposed to say 'fuzzy'. Thank you though! :)
Phoenix. said...
on Feb. 14 2012 at 4:17 am
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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Great poem but i suggest you change the funny part like you said that way you have a better chance the editor likes it. :)
DanniLynn SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:56 pm
DanniLynn SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
6 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A penny for my thoughts, oh no, I'll sell them for a dollar, they're worth so much more after i'm a goner, and maybe then you'll hear the words I been singinm funny when your dead how people start listenin,"- The Band Perry

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Thank you :) yeah I wrote it because of memories from when I lived in Lake Tahoe Ca
Angelgirl39 GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:52 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\&quot;<br /> ~Robert Frost<br /> <br /> \&quot;Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\&quot;<br /> ~Edgar Allan Poe

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I really like it, I gave it five stars. Soo good. Reminds me of how it is right now in CO
DanniLynn SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 5:31 pm
DanniLynn SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
6 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A penny for my thoughts, oh no, I&#039;ll sell them for a dollar, they&#039;re worth so much more after i&#039;m a goner, and maybe then you&#039;ll hear the words I been singinm funny when your dead how people start listenin,&quot;- The Band Perry

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Thanks Brad -my shining star hahahahahah
baja's star said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 5:08 pm
Another 5 star poem. Well done love
metalmama said...
on Dec. 28 2010 at 10:35 pm
i love this poem. 
DAD 777 JC said...
on Dec. 28 2010 at 3:12 pm
VERY NICE BABE,PROUD OF U,KEEP WRITING
auntieL said...
on Dec. 27 2010 at 7:15 pm
The last 3 words bring up the emotions upon reading this poem.  What a great word picture!
danni. said...
on Dec. 26 2010 at 7:37 pm
This is Dannielle the writer of this poem. It is supposed to say fuzzy not funny.