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Falling Snow

January 27, 2010
By APoetAtHeart GOLD, Lyman, Maine
APoetAtHeart GOLD, Lyman, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
" I am, Who I Am, But WHY I Am,Who I Am, Is What Confuses Me." - By Me


Snow,
Trees sway,
Winter sings,
Pale,dying skies,
As I sit before,
This window pane,watching
Souls fall out of my sky, they
Whisper a soft hello slowly,
I press my hand against the cold pane,
Wishing I could just fall from the pale sky.



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on Feb. 14 2010 at 1:02 pm
LihuaEmily SILVER, North Kingstown, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"It is said that there's no such thing as a free lunch. But the universe is the ultimate free lunch." -Alan Guth

It was a beautiful poem. I do think you used "sky" more often than necessary, which made it sound rather repetitive, but it was a very gentle, sweet piece.