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Broken

January 14, 2010
By CortaduraChica PLATINUM, Lancaster, Ohio
CortaduraChica PLATINUM, Lancaster, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
You love to hate the one who loves the one you hate to love.<br /> &quot;LSHIFOMD JKIDHAD BIIDINHW&quot;


I'm broken in two,
And yes its by you,
It's because of me,
I was to stupid to see,
You didn't want to break my heart,
But now it is all torn apart,
I wish you would just tell me the answer now,
So i can slowly start to get over you somehow,
I know i'll cry lots of tears,
And hope that noone ever hears.

The author's comments:
relationships are really hard when you are a teenager.

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on Mar. 20 2010 at 8:08 pm
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stupid Is As Stupid Does.&quot; -Forest Gump (;<br /> &quot;No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude.&quot;

I like this one a lot. You should work on your capitalization though. And maybe put periods in certain spots instead of commas, but overall very good job.