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His Eyes

December 23, 2009
By JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I&#039;m not&quot; <br /> &quot;Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you.&quot;

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When you look into them you can see his soul
You can see the hurt that he has been through
The tears that he has cried
The days he spent alone show through
All of his parents mistakes show in his eyes
His beautiful brown eyes tell so much
He is asking for help
No begging
Begging for someone to reach out to him
He has tried to hide it for too long
He’s breaking
Falling
His beautiful brown eyes call out to me
Asking for help
I take him in my arms
Tell him everything will be okay
Reassure him
When I look into his eyes now
They smile

© Krystal B., Bloomingdale , IL

The author's comments:
This is to someone that I really love...thanks for reading and please comment
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Sarita15 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 1:46 am
Sarita15 BRONZE, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
Anyone perfect must be lying / Anything easy has its costs / Anyone plain can be lovely / Anyone loved can be lost

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I really like this :)
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 10 2010 at 2:27 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I&#039;m not&quot; <br /> &quot;Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you.&quot;

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Thanks for the comment, and I really liked your poem. And I totally agree as far as Candice Olson. Lol
SarClark BRONZE said...
on Apr. 10 2010 at 2:00 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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My poem is like this too, the one I asked if you'd look at, but I wrote it after meeting my best friend's old best friend... so in a way that sucked but I really like this. Hope he's okay.