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Alone in Anger MAG

November 4, 2009
By DefyGravity129 SILVER, Mont Vernon, New Hampshire
DefyGravity129 SILVER, Mont Vernon, New Hampshire
5 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Old wounds still burn." - Law & Order SVU


The mirror sits lonely,
Left upon a growling drawer.
It anxiously waits from dawn 'til dusk.
To cheerfully dance with a reflection.
Cruel shadows mock desire,
And sinister stars laugh.
Enraged, the mirror shatters
Spilling exhausted shards.



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on Apr. 22 2011 at 4:12 pm
my.freedom.lies.in.free.verse PLATINUM, Tosa, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm in love with you, and I know that love is just a shout into a void, and that oblivion is inevitable... and I know the sun will swallow the only earth we'll ever have, and I am in love with you." Augustus Waters

i loved the metaphors and personification and the length :)) keep writing

on Apr. 27 2010 at 7:29 pm
AinsleyChernek SILVER, Eatonville, Washington
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I really liked this.  Good job :)

on Apr. 12 2010 at 8:13 pm
DefyGravity129 SILVER, Mont Vernon, New Hampshire
5 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Old wounds still burn." - Law & Order SVU

Thanks! :) I'm glad you liked it! :D

on Apr. 12 2010 at 3:58 pm
Michael Tuerk BRONZE, Amherst, New Hampshire
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Congrats on being published, Amelia! :)

BTW: MANGE MANGE MANGE!!!!!