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At Death

September 11, 2009
By LiGht-ChaseR GOLD, Out There, Oklahoma
LiGht-ChaseR GOLD, Out There, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The Dark is generous, and it is patient, and it always wins, but in the heart of its strength lies weakness: One lone candle is enough to hold it back.<br /> Love is more than a candle.<br /> Love can ignite the stars.&quot; -Matthew Stover


Someone dies and your heart shatters...
When you cry, know I'm right there...
Waiting for a better day,
remembering our precious years.


The author's comments:
Life is fragile and always breaks. It is precious...

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at*004 said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 12:17 pm
i loved it! It was really good

on Sep. 30 2009 at 11:30 am
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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you are good but add more desciption to make us leaving and wanting to no more but over all pretty damn good!

on Sep. 30 2009 at 11:06 am
Life should happy so write about happy thing. I liked the description in the poem

Isac said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 3:05 pm
i to have had some one in my life die this poem means a lot

on Sep. 29 2009 at 2:59 pm
wow this was really discrpitive and it showed how much you cared and reminds me of when my dog died

MIkyD992 said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 11:51 am
It was short and sweet. I think it capture the "heart shattering pain" that comes with death.

OmzingTwins! said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 11:49 am
This is an amazing poem!! I liked how it leaves us shocked!!

maria lover said...
on Sep. 28 2009 at 9:54 pm
this relates to me when my grandma died