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August 25, 2009
By qwerty42 GOLD, Waverly, Kentucky
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qwerty42 GOLD, Waverly, Kentucky
13 articles 10 photos 28 comments

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Do or do not, there is no try. -Yoda

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Monotone metronomes
beating out the sound
of all the discord
in my heart.
Once, twice, the
strings are plucked,
threatening to snap.
The melancholy
of the world
resting in the
notes,
slowly taking
my song
and tearing it
apart.

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

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qwerty42 GOLD said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 2:34 am
qwerty42 GOLD, Waverly, Kentucky
13 articles 10 photos 28 comments

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of course! nerds rule :D
Vacilator BRONZE said...
on Jul. 4 2011 at 8:54 pm
Vacilator BRONZE, Merritt Island, Florida
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No cup of tea is large enough, or book long enough, to suit me. <br /> -C.S. Lewis

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This is sweeeeeeeeet!  Not surprised it got published, 'cause it rocks! =)

like nerds

Chibbie1 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 24 2010 at 4:32 pm
Chibbie1 PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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This is great work i really enjoy this peice. It is heart wrenching yet not to the brink of despair. I hope you keep on wirting and please review on my work sometime :)
qwerty42 GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 12:40 pm
qwerty42 GOLD, Waverly, Kentucky
13 articles 10 photos 28 comments

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thanks a bunch!
ramnapotter PLATINUM said...
on May. 10 2010 at 5:51 pm
ramnapotter PLATINUM, Toronto, Other
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&ldquo;Write to be understood, speak to be heard, read to grow...&rdquo;

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ahah , you shouldn't be amazed at all . this piece was great ; the imagery is simple but supple in the most subtle and soft way ! (: nice job . hey , and check out some of my work . thanks , girl . and kudos again . :D
qwerty42 GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 1:22 pm
qwerty42 GOLD, Waverly, Kentucky
13 articles 10 photos 28 comments

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Do or do not, there is no try. -Yoda

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thanks! i was sooo excited when i saw your comment, it was the first that anyone has put on any of my work! this poem actually got published!!!! i was sooooooooooo amazed!
Bethani GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2010 at 9:30 pm
Bethani GOLD, Highlands Ranch, Colorado
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Life is perfect until you sit back and realize how boring it is without risks.

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Short, sweet and simple! I love how you explain the mood. Keep writing!