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You told me...
August 19, 2009
You told me that you loved me,
You told me that you cared
You said I was the only one you loved. But you told her the same thing.
© Kelly F., Pompton Plains, NJ
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This article has 9 comments.
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 1 2010 at 4:03 pm
Wow...thanks! Now I feel like I have to write about a butterfly with a broken wing...thanks for your comment and insperation!
timevampire GOLD said...
on Sep. 1 2010 at 3:29 pm
Reminds me of a butterfly with a broken wing. Sad little powerful image.
NeverCaredForKool-Aid GOLD said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 2:27 pm
ooh
I hope that acctually didn't happen to you
Loved the voice in it though- very bitter sounding
thewriteidea DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 7:26 pm
This is the definition of short and sweet. In less than 30 words you conveyed your emotion perfectly. Very nice job...
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 3:25 pm
Thank you!...no hugs... :-( my friend just said I told you so....
In_Love_Loved PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 5:16 pm
Oh wow. I'm really sorry. But at least a powerful piece of writing came out of it... I hope you got hugged for this.
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 8 2009 at 11:35 am
Yup..... ik this one kinda sucks but I wrote in like 2 seconds.. ty for the comment
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