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Vampiric Lover

March 30, 2009
By Katheryne Ray BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
Katheryne Ray BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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I hate this vampire stuck inside of me
it turns the world backwards and upside down
I watch life go by me like a great sea
I am no queen but yet I wear a crown
he kills me slowly with life rejection
I no longer have control over him
I asked my friends and heard no objection
such love he gave so I went on a limb
I stand here palened and so very artistic
a vision of vampire beauty, that’s true
His queen he made me, so very basic
I realize I’m his toy so shiny, new
I see him now laying upon the floor
knife in hand, I ended the blood and gore



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Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 8 2009 at 11:52 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

I hate it when you write something about vampires and people automatically start playing "Spot the Twilight Fan". This is totally UnTwilight-esque and I love it. It's hard to find a good vampire piece that doesn't sound like Twilight, but I found one! Great job. ZERO