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Coffee Sun

July 20, 2009
By FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t have ambitions or desires. <br /> Being a poet isn&#039;t my ambition, <br /> it&#039;s my way of being alone.<br /> ~ Fernando Pessoa ~


as we walked down on the
tide, my moon bathed
sundress whips down on the
white crests, my feet
graze the sea salt
we walk on wateras he grabs my waist and drags my breath
away under the surface
my mind goes fuzzy as my eyes
meet his
life stares at me through
moonbeam lenses and i catch
a star in my hand as i slip my
palm into his and take him
under with me
we float neutral in the
blackened midst of liquid
sun
his eyes twinkle and he
spurs to the surface
i follow
we fly to the diamonds above
they twist and turn,
becoming my sundress and my
hearthe steals my smile
i steal his
we burst into a million stars
we take flight


The author's comments:
I love to read and write, and i love looking at art, even though i can't draw. when i grow up i hope to be an author, pshychologist, or work with autistic children.

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on Sep. 18 2009 at 9:46 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t have ambitions or desires. <br /> Being a poet isn&#039;t my ambition, <br /> it&#039;s my way of being alone.<br /> ~ Fernando Pessoa ~

Thanks so much...and i'll be looking out for your work

on Aug. 3 2009 at 5:21 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

wow! this is such a sweet and heartwritten article. it made me smile, and this was one of those gushy lovey dovey things that i LOVE!!! you're really good, and i love (absolutely LOVE) this article! comment on some of my work please <3