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The beginning of their misery

June 7, 2023
By amoniejanee BRONZE, Rochester, New York
amoniejanee BRONZE, Rochester, New York
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He was completely dumbfounded by her astonishing appearance.

The petite female in a wedding dress shook him to the core. 


From two Highschool Sweethearts, Now to Husband and Wife

The floundering soon began, and the stagger to get his words out took place. 

Throughout the venue, champagne-colored, white roses and the scent of candles filled the area

His heartbeat began to pulsate like a ticking bomb 


He began to feel harried, like a huge weight of an 18-wheeler truck has been placed on his shoulders.

The coo´s of the doves in the park filled the park with a hushed,  solid sound. 

They approached each other, the greeting of a lifetime, filled with hugs, kisses, happiness, and tears of Joy.

Her scent, Warm and Cozy like a huge Merino Wool Blanket. 

The hug was immaculate. 

His smell, tough cologne, and ease of Sandalwood. 


A flock of birds began to encircle the newlyweds.

They have now repainted their lives as a couple. 

The exchange of promising words for a lifetime has taken place.


The cheers of the crowd, filled with friends and family, the tearful joy cries of Mom and Dad.

The congratulations were received while they walk down the aisle. 


The author's comments:

This piece was made off the wedding experience of my cousin, and me just being in the zone. I actually liked this poem since poetry isn't one of my strengths so I actually take pride and joy in this piece, I hope the receiver of this poem enjoys it also!


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