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Remembering
May 24, 2009
The Sun smiles and tells a story
that no one has heard before,
but it doesn't have to be hidden,
or forgotten anymore.
The sea, wind and sky
were together as a whole.
The mountains, plains and deserts
were all part of the same soul.
The fire, rain and snow
came with all their power.
The lightning and the thunder
became frozen before the hour.
The trees, bushes and grasses
All held their mighty stance.
The birds, flies and fishes
were all given the chance.
But the Earth was meant to change,
so the Sun had to too.
And she forgot all she'd seen
And all she had been through.
But when the wind blows just right,
and when the waves calm in the sea,
The Sun remembers the beauty
and she shares her memory.
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anotherromanctic PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:20 pm
beautiful. (:
amusedsimpleton BRONZE said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 7:56 pm
This is so good! It paints a really beautiful picture in my mind. I can't wait to read the rest of your pieces. :D
MariaMarie DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 7 2009 at 2:38 pm
I love this too, I love your writing, it's truly amazing and you manage to capture atleast half the beauty of nature that most of us can't! Incredible.
shelby_kat DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 2 2009 at 4:43 pm
**** ut sooo good! :D i saw that u read that one poem i wrote...well compared to u i ***** hahaha i gotta work on that, aannnyywayyy, YOUR AWESOME!!! KEEP ON WRITING! :D
kaseyparks PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 29 2009 at 4:20 pm
this is amazing!
forever_misguided GOLD said...
on Aug. 27 2009 at 9:11 pm
wow, thats amazing. ur very talented at making people picture exactly what you write. i would love it if i got some of your feedback on some of my contributions....
Raid2bcool GOLD said...
on Aug. 27 2009 at 3:17 am
omigoodness... this is so amazing... i love it =D this poem is so gorgeous.... keep up the awesome work
PinkPrincess GOLD said...
on Aug. 26 2009 at 8:02 pm
this is a really remarkable poem. you have a great gift keep using it, good job!
Sunshine247 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 25 2009 at 10:54 pm
Oh my goodness, I love it!!! :D It's beautiful!!! :D
Bookwormwriter SILVER said...
on Aug. 25 2009 at 10:35 pm
i love it! the detail is amazing, i love the last stanza! you're a great writer! Keep writing
ThereIsAlwaysHope GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2009 at 5:09 pm
this is amazing. absolutely amazing. exceptional writing. keep it up. (:
lightbearer GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2009 at 12:52 am
AMAZING! i really like your style. wishing i could write something like that. check out some of my pieces.
Dreamer123 SILVER said...
on Aug. 19 2009 at 1:45 am
this is incredible i love the way you described it its full of nature and yet mixed with life. i love it this is my fave. god bless you.
delizabethl PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 18 2009 at 4:33 pm
Beautiful. Beautiful and rhythmic.
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