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Yes, We Should Ban the Keeping Of Animals In Zoos

May 3, 2010
By harborlights BRONZE, Janesville, Wisconsin
harborlights BRONZE, Janesville, Wisconsin
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Several years ago, the Woburn Safari Park in Bedfordshire, England admitted to killing excess monkeys. The park said that it cost too much to continue to feed the monkeys, so the animals were shot and left to die.

This is just one of the many cases in which animals are mistreated, murdered, and malnourished by humans. Animals should be able to live life in natural environments without any negative influences by humans.

The first reason zoos should be banned is because of the fact that malnutrition, mistreatment, and murder (the three m's) is becoming more and more popular in zoos worldwide. From China to Detroit, animals are not being treated the way animals should be treated. In fact, some animals are not even getting a chance at life. In 2007, the IDA (In Defense of Animals) came out with a top ten list of the worst places for an elephant to go. All ten of the American zoos have had elephants die prematurely there. This is because of mistreatment of animals (improper diet, lack of exercise, unsuitable living conditions, etc.).

Another example of mistreatment in zoos is illegal substances being made from animals. A tiger bone wine, banned in 1993, has been sold on the Chinese black market for several years now. Illegal transactions like this are very easy because of vets at the zoos.

The third reason zoos should be illegal is because they can give visitors the wrong idea about animals. Animals will behave differently in the wild then they will in a closed area. For example, animals in the wild are not given food through a slot in the door. Also, animals in captivity are tamer than animals in the wild, so if someone came across an animal in the wild, they may think it is safe to approach the animal when it is not. People could easily get hurt.

The final reason zoos should be banned is that it is just not morally correct. Humans are animals too. What if animals got smart and decided to capture humans and put them in zoos? Humans, if given the option, would probably choose to be free rather than be gawked at all day.

So in order to keep the circle of life and continue to have animals be a part of the world, humans must take basic steps to maintain the delicate balance between man and beast.


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This is actually an essay I had to write for a debate in my language arts class. I thought it turned out kinda good, so I decided to post it on TeenInk!!

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on Mar. 9 2015 at 12:30 am
I still think that animals should be kept out of places like this unless they are really hurt

said...
on Mar. 9 2015 at 12:30 am
I still think that animals should be kept out of places like this unless they are really hurt

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on Mar. 9 2015 at 12:30 am
I still think that animals should be kept out of places like this unless they are really hurt

on Jan. 4 2015 at 12:18 pm
SaraElizabeth PLATINUM, St. Charles, Missouri
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It honestly depends on the zoo. Some have well-designed enclosures for their animals, and do amazing things for animals whom are endangered, or those who would never survive In the wild on their own. I grew up going to a well known zoo in my city and I've seen some of the great things they've done for helpless animals.

swaaaggeerr said...
on Oct. 10 2014 at 12:50 am
thanks for sharing this you deserve a medal

koolio said...
on Jun. 18 2014 at 3:43 pm
thank u so much for this! whe are doing an essay on why zoos should not be banned but we need to show we are not biased when typing it up, so therefore i need some disadvantages of the zoo. tthis has really helped  :3

zoeboepoe said...
on Jun. 11 2014 at 12:47 pm
i love this article! lol at the bottom tho it says "Free zoo coupons!"

Sshsjs said...
on May. 30 2014 at 9:03 pm
No one cares what u ask

shajeel said...
on Apr. 23 2014 at 12:27 pm
i agree animals should not be kept in zoos

BanZoos666 said...
on Mar. 24 2014 at 3:49 pm
Hi, we are having a debate if zoos should be banned. I would like to know your opinion. Thanks!

IRock said...
on Feb. 12 2014 at 6:48 pm
I Love it too!

monkey said...
on Jan. 28 2014 at 7:46 am
the only reason the monkeys where culled is because they had a disease that was potentially deadly to humans

Luke said...
on Dec. 16 2013 at 8:46 pm
it was good but didnt have a good conclusion, and I really liked the begining, not that they were shot but, you had a good introduction.  =)

6261jk said...
on Dec. 11 2013 at 3:15 pm
hey well this was a well written article but u should know somethings i am having a dabate right in school if we are going to keep or bann zoos and i am a con so ya and u need to make sure u know all of ur info before posting but thank u so much this website did help me alot thanx 

lauren said...
on Oct. 9 2013 at 6:31 pm
There are some very valid points in this essay, and my grade 8 class is currently having an assignment dedicated to creating essays involving forclosures of zoos. Truly, this was a well written essay but when trying to convince someone that zoos are bad, make sure you know that all your information is 100% accurate. For example at woburn safari zoo they did shoot and kill monkeys, but this was because they were carrying diseases deadly to humans (simian Herpes B virus) But in all fairness, this virues was a result of poorly tending to animals.   I very much enjoyed reading this essay :)
 

on Jun. 4 2013 at 6:43 pm
harborlights BRONZE, Janesville, Wisconsin
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

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Writing is a form of personal freedom. It frees us from the mass identity we see in the making all around us. In the end, writers will write not to be outlaw heroes of some underculture but mainly to save themselves, to survive as individuals.

Thank you!

on May. 14 2013 at 3:44 am
good job i really enjoyed this essy

loser263 said...
on May. 7 2013 at 3:03 am
animals donot deserve this wrong treatment and i cant see this happen again

MosesDecorah said...
on May. 3 2013 at 1:57 pm
YEs dude we should  

celseteygirl said...
on Jan. 23 2013 at 11:03 pm
i too thought this article inspired me to write an arguement about baning zoos