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INFINITY: Part One

October 10, 2011
By kingofwriters BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
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kingofwriters BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
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&quot;Books are a uniquely portable magic.&quot; - Stephen King<br /> <br /> I love books, and I love technology, but I don&#039;t want to see the latter overwhelm the former. I just think books are meant to be pages you turn, not screens you scroll through.

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Summary:

Off the coast of Mexico, there's an uncharted island that few have explored...and those few have never come back. This island has many dark and powerful secrets...secrets that are too much for George Herring to handle.

George is an ordinary 12-year old whose dad takes him and his little sister on a trip to see the island. Little do they know about the island's strange secrets, and after they're shipwrecked, they have to find a way off the island.

But this proves to be a challenge for all of them, and they soon find themselves in a heated battle for their lives.

Read Part One of this amazing novel, and keep on the lookout for Part Two!

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__horizon133 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 21 2012 at 9:09 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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&quot;laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone.&quot; anonymous

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yeah, I get that too. almost all of my articles have been veiwed but no one rates or comments. I like your prolog and am starting the book--so far so good! :P
Odyesseus said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 12:03 pm
meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
kingofwriters BRONZE said...
on Nov. 19 2011 at 3:37 pm
kingofwriters BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Books are a uniquely portable magic.&quot; - Stephen King<br /> <br /> I love books, and I love technology, but I don&#039;t want to see the latter overwhelm the former. I just think books are meant to be pages you turn, not screens you scroll through.

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Okay, who else thinks it's weird that 112 people have rated my story, but only 76 have viewed it?
kingofwriters BRONZE said...
on Nov. 11 2011 at 6:20 pm
kingofwriters BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Books are a uniquely portable magic.&quot; - Stephen King<br /> <br /> I love books, and I love technology, but I don&#039;t want to see the latter overwhelm the former. I just think books are meant to be pages you turn, not screens you scroll through.

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Thanks for the feedback! :)

By the way, if you were hoping to read Part Two, it's also posted!

BluBliss GOLD said...
on Nov. 11 2011 at 4:26 pm
BluBliss GOLD, New York, New York
14 articles 0 photos 161 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bella&#039;s love for Edward was like, &quot;Omg. He&#039;s hot. He&#039;s mine because he sparkles. Now I&#039;ll brood the wholle book while I&#039;m with him.&quot;

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oh, okay, if you say so.... HAHAHAHAHAHA! HON HON HON HON! heh heh! heheheh...heh heh... heeee.... Okay im done.

 

BluBliss GOLD said...
on Nov. 11 2011 at 4:14 pm
BluBliss GOLD, New York, New York
14 articles 0 photos 161 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bella&#039;s love for Edward was like, &quot;Omg. He&#039;s hot. He&#039;s mine because he sparkles. Now I&#039;ll brood the wholle book while I&#039;m with him.&quot;

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I like the mood that's in place: how I feel like I'm there, everything 's surrounding me. I also love the plot: it just seems to fit well with my preferences. But I don't like teh use of adverbs: adverbs weaken writing.
kingofwriters BRONZE said...
on Oct. 29 2011 at 7:03 am
kingofwriters BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Books are a uniquely portable magic.&quot; - Stephen King<br /> <br /> I love books, and I love technology, but I don&#039;t want to see the latter overwhelm the former. I just think books are meant to be pages you turn, not screens you scroll through.

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ATTENTION

Part Two is coming soon!!!

kingofwriters BRONZE said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 2:04 pm
kingofwriters BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Books are a uniquely portable magic.&quot; - Stephen King<br /> <br /> I love books, and I love technology, but I don&#039;t want to see the latter overwhelm the former. I just think books are meant to be pages you turn, not screens you scroll through.

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I'm writing a LOT more to it, lucky for you!

I'm dividing the whole book into seperate novels, and each novel will have seven chapters in it. The next novel (which may be coming very soon) will be Chapters 8 through 14.

Thanks for reading! :)

the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 9:14 am
the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-you PLATINUM, Batesville, Indiana
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love comes and goes,<br /> just like the watter flows

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please tell me that you are wrighting more to it
kingofwriters BRONZE said...
on Oct. 21 2011 at 2:14 pm
kingofwriters BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Books are a uniquely portable magic.&quot; - Stephen King<br /> <br /> I love books, and I love technology, but I don&#039;t want to see the latter overwhelm the former. I just think books are meant to be pages you turn, not screens you scroll through.

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Yeah, I am writing more of this!

I'm almost done with Infinity: Part Two! And you might like that even better than Part One!

Thanks for reading! :)

Kev-Girl SILVER said...
on Oct. 21 2011 at 8:39 am
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
5 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :) <br /> <br /> Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing. <br /> <br /> If you cant annoy someone, there&#039;s no point in writing.<br /> <br /> Love is overrated, marry for money.

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This is very good! It kept me reading! I love it! Are you going to write more in this story? I would kinda like to know what ends up happening to them.
kingofwriters BRONZE said...
on Oct. 16 2011 at 9:58 am
kingofwriters BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Books are a uniquely portable magic.&quot; - Stephen King<br /> <br /> I love books, and I love technology, but I don&#039;t want to see the latter overwhelm the former. I just think books are meant to be pages you turn, not screens you scroll through.

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I changed my screen name to kingofwriters, just in case you were wondering.
kingofwriters BRONZE said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 11:24 am
kingofwriters BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Books are a uniquely portable magic.&quot; - Stephen King<br /> <br /> I love books, and I love technology, but I don&#039;t want to see the latter overwhelm the former. I just think books are meant to be pages you turn, not screens you scroll through.

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Hey, thanks! I'll read your story, and I'll give you some feedback! 

P.S. If you haven't rated my story yet, please do that!

Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 11:02 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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READ THIS STORY PEOPLE!!!!! IT ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!! :)(:
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 10:31 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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oh! And if u had time please check out my story called: Alien Invasion Series: Book One: The Caller. All u have to do is click my user name!!!! Thanks! ANd keep writing!!!!!! :)(:
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 10:28 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Ha ha!!!!! u said I instead of it!!!! Thats Ok IT still ROCKS!!!!!!!!!! :)(:
kingofwriters BRONZE said...
on Oct. 13 2011 at 2:16 pm
kingofwriters BRONZE, DeWitt, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Books are a uniquely portable magic.&quot; - Stephen King<br /> <br /> I love books, and I love technology, but I don&#039;t want to see the latter overwhelm the former. I just think books are meant to be pages you turn, not screens you scroll through.

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AAAAAH!!!! I messed it up! In the first chapter, I messed something up!

If the narrator starts talking about how he looks beautiful, he was SUPPOSED to be talking about the sunset, but I messed it up.

(Feel free to laugh, but I'm embarressed.)