Sorry i didn't see this earlier! i loved reading this! i want more. please write more whether or not you get more views... none of my friends are on the site so i can't tell them about it or anything but i WILL think of something to help you out.

What about the gun thing though? Was that just to confuse me? If not, are you going to take my idea? because the only thing i can think of if annie survives that long from such a close range, she must be some sort of robot/droid! :D

Gosh thanks so much for the feedback! Do you think you can reccommend the reading to anyone? I want to post another chapter hoping someone will read it lol. Sometimes, like a few books or mysteries, the author will throw just a few things in to confuse or distract you from something else. And that just may be what I'm doing o.O lol Chapter 2 will be on it's way if i get a few more views

This really kept me on the edge of my seat. I wish i knew who did it, but i don't know! :(

There were a couple parts i thought were odd. When she went into the store to get the chips and the newspaper and she tell the guy her macily is dead and he just goes, "oh, i didn't know." Like it was a normal thing that happens on a day to day basis. Well, really what was the point of that scene?

Also, Annie was shot with the gun to her head. I was EXTREMELY shocked to find that she lived when her head was probably shattered into a thoussand pieces from a gunshot from an inch away. maybe you should specify where he shot her. Or have a telephone call to annies house to look oout the window, and then annie gets shot from a farther distance and not through the head, but through the chest. That would be more believable, i think.

Overall, this was a good read. (although, i really don't like reading on books on the computer, you know? I need to turn the pages!) I hope this isn't the end because i definitely still DO NOT have the answer of who it is. Which totally STINKS for me!!!!! I commend your great writing though... Also what was with the random boy on the subway? That got me thinking, who in the world is he??? :) WHO IS THE KILLER??? dun dun DUN!