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The Black Arrow Murders
February 2, 2011
Summary:
Noah is a 17 year old boy living with his brother in Black Arrow Minnesota. A small farm town that suddenly goes into panic when a string of murders ad kidnappings begin.
When the crimes start affecting Noah's friends and family he starts trying to figure out who's behind these malicious crimes, but what he finds out will his life forever.
This small town is in trouble, can a 17 year old boy stop the criminal? or will he become just another victim of the maniac? A murder mystery that will keep you guessing until the very end.
Alec S.
The Black Arrow Murders
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This book has 22 comments.
Ashley_Tucker said...
on Apr. 23 2012 at 6:58 pm
The entire first chapter was information overload. We don't need to know everyones life story before the actual story begins. Take your first paragraph for instance. Let us know this is all taking place in Black Arrow within the first page or two along with how much he hates the town. Towards the end of the first chapter let us find out that his parents died. That's heart renching stuff! But if I only know the boys name and where he is, how am I supposed to feel bad for him when you bring up that he's an orphan in the third sentence of the book? He's barely a person to me yet. Read Plot and Sctructure by James Scott Bell.
DarkMountain BRONZE said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 12:07 pm
Good story! But way too much "telling", in my opinion. Every emotion, action, or aspect of the story was relayed through an "and then this happened" format, which is great for a certain audience. However, I'd work on more of a "showing" approach- it can tear down the barrier between story and reader, and gives it a more real feel. Still, I liked the story a lot. Good work.
Ewburt said...
on Nov. 12 2011 at 10:27 am
how did this get to #2 LOL
kitkat said...
on Oct. 30 2011 at 4:55 pm
I liked it. 3/10
KangarooHulabaloo BRONZE said...
on Oct. 6 2011 at 9:34 pm
Cool story, I would just say that if you revise it, it will definitely be smoother
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 1:14 pm
nightstalker part three, four, and five is now out! Go check it out if you liked the first and second! :)(:
Marlo said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 11:01 am
Could have beenn better, man. It had its moments but overall felt lacking. Still liked it though.
Alec.M.Strong BRONZE said...
on May. 22 2011 at 12:57 am
what do you mean woah?
thelibrarian BRONZE said...
on May. 19 2011 at 8:51 pm
......woah.
fc barca 10 said...
on May. 1 2011 at 12:22 pm
what can I say about this story, AWESOME! keep writing! I can't wait to read your next work!
mac123 said...
on Apr. 30 2011 at 8:35 am
Best book I've read on here! awesome story! please keep writing!!!
Beautiful Jaz said...
on Apr. 24 2011 at 12:43 pm
this book was great, fascinating story and definetly a ending I didn't expect. Well done!
Alec.M.Strong BRONZE said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 9:12 pm
thank you! I'll get to it when I can i've got lots going on now but I will get to it! :D
Alec.M.Strong BRONZE said...
on Feb. 22 2011 at 10:03 pm
It is a bit short but it is a children's book, can't have it to long. I also plan to extend it a bit to add to the story. Thanks!
Timekeeper DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 22 2011 at 8:05 pm
This is neat, it was cool to be able to read the entire thing all the way through, but it was a little short! I look forward to your next work!
Alec.M.Strong BRONZE said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 1:42 pm
Thank you for the support!
Blondi said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 11:28 am
Good job, Alec! You have a talent for building suspense, once I started, I couldn't stop reading. I just had to know what came next.
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