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Mysterious Love
Summary:
As Ash goes through many different challenges he thought he would never see himself going through, seems like it might be the last things he will ever do. He loses his lover, his brother, and he may just end up losing his life. He meets a new girl named Thorn, but can he trust her? In the book Mysterious Love, it will keep you on edge.
-Missy-
Mysterious Love
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This was interesting. It's a good idea, though I don't usually read stories so...dark, I guess.
The wording was very awkward at some parts and I agree, just polish it some and you could have a great story!
I liked the idea of the story because it was really morbid and there was a great point of view change in there too. That is hard to master and I think you did it well here.
One thing that I didn't like is that at times you wording was just extremeley awkward and you used words in an incorrect context. For me, that is a HUGE pet peeve. I would say even if you went through and fixed wording. Usually I don't make too many comments about wording but in this case their are some really messy examples of this.
All in all it was a clever and witty piece for a teen. You thought out the ideas and there were no unreasonable events. The execution though was sloppy at times. Edit it up and make it neater and you've got a great story here. :)
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Pessimism comes from our passion, optimism comes from our will.