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Divided

November 27, 2016
By wolvesandwilderness GOLD, Lakeland, Florida
wolvesandwilderness GOLD, Lakeland, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Funny how a single word can change everything in your life.&quot;<br /> &quot;It is not funny at all. Steel is power. Money is power. But of all the things in all the worlds, words are power.&rdquo;<br /> <br /> Darrow au Andromedus and Nero au Augustus in Red Rising.


Summary:

You're being held captive. Your enemy is ruthless, determined to get the information you know. You are determined as well- don't tell him a word, don't say anything. You cannot give up.


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Divided


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on Jan. 29 2017 at 4:47 am
valkyrie1212 BRONZE, Adelaide, Other
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This is like my first time I've actually used this site, so I didn't know that all comments will be shown on every chapter! I apologise, if I find something exceptional/to improve, I'll name the Chapter.

on Jan. 29 2017 at 4:43 am
valkyrie1212 BRONZE, Adelaide, Other
2 articles 0 photos 34 comments
The use of the 'second person' point of view provided a nice start to the book. I was a little unsure at the start because I felt the first two paragraphs dragged out a little too much, but after reading the whole chapter, that intro started to feel like more of a foundation, which is good. Not sure if that's what you were aiming for, but it was good. I liked how it slowly slips into the action, the suspense. The grammar, spelling, all that jazz - great. The end of the chapter was really well done. I'll move on to the next chapters now :)