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The Hope That Ran

May 10, 2016
By imagonner, loveland, Colorado
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imagonner, Loveland, Colorado
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' its not about winning fist place in the race, its about finishing the race.' don't forget who you are to me.

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After finding her older brothers body, she finds hard secrets of her past. during this hannah has a brain bleed, leaving her with only months to live. she has memmories of her past, of her dad who went missing when she was ten. this story is jaw-dropping and will leave my readers guessing until the end.

Tags: Love/relationshipsFamilyFriendsDeath/lossHealthCurrent events/politics'its not about winning first place in the raceIts about finishing the race.'

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This book has 15 comments.

Chrissiana1320 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 23 2016 at 5:48 pm
Chrissiana1320 BRONZE, Hypoluxo, Florida
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&quot;It isn&#039;t what you can do with your strength, but how you chose to use.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -By me, I think.

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This is good!
imagonner said...
on May. 20 2016 at 10:20 am
imagonner, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&#039; its not about winning fist place in the race, its about finishing the race.&#039; don&#039;t forget who you are to me.

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@sabbylynn thank you so much, for your kindness. I am continuing to write this, on my flash drive. I am reposting another The Hope That Ran, where I added somethings in it and a couple more chapters.
sabbylynn BRONZE said...
on May. 19 2016 at 11:01 pm
sabbylynn BRONZE, Lehigh Acres, Florida
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If you want something you have never gotten, you will have to do something you have never done<br /> Well behaved women seldom make history

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i also love the title " the hope that ran" sounds like something that can really change something in someone's life and make a difference. i like things that actually mean something good job.
sabbylynn BRONZE said...
on May. 19 2016 at 10:59 pm
sabbylynn BRONZE, Lehigh Acres, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
If you want something you have never gotten, you will have to do something you have never done<br /> Well behaved women seldom make history

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wow this book is amazing you were absolutely right it is draw dropping i love this so much thank you for mentioning this i am grateful and like you said you will comment on our articles i am holding you up to this @imagonner. i admire your courage to write a book even if it isnt finished and i loved the plot. you should keep writing you are very good.
imagonner said...
on May. 19 2016 at 9:03 pm
imagonner, Loveland, Colorado
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&#039; its not about winning fist place in the race, its about finishing the race.&#039; don&#039;t forget who you are to me.

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I also made a point to have short sentences to leave my reader guessing. that's just how I write, I guess
imagonner said...
on May. 19 2016 at 8:11 pm
imagonner, Loveland, Colorado
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&#039; its not about winning fist place in the race, its about finishing the race.&#039; don&#039;t forget who you are to me.

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could you give me examples of "choppy sentences?" that don't give description
imagonner said...
on May. 19 2016 at 8:08 pm
imagonner, Loveland, Colorado
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&#039; its not about winning fist place in the race, its about finishing the race.&#039; don&#039;t forget who you are to me.

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I do appreciate your honesty. thank you for checking this story out. I have another, better version were I made some changes. I posted this a while back.... while I have been writing more chapters and went through to make it better. it is currently still pending, so yes I definitely see what you are saying. know it is being fixed. thank you for your tips on how to make myself a better writer. @Brelaw67
Brelaw67 PLATINUM said...
on May. 19 2016 at 7:27 pm
Brelaw67 PLATINUM, Evansville, Wisconsin
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My own experience is that once a story has been written, one has to cross out the beginning and the end. It is there that we authors do most of our lying.<br /> - Anton Chekhov

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Imagoner, I like the plot, and I think that you could have lots of potential with this story, but that being said, and I had thus problem too, your sentences are too choppy to get some good description and character into the story. Just work on having a variety of sentences, and the description will come with it. And I know it's going to be hard to arrange your sentences accordingly, but with some good effort, this could turn out very nicely. Overall, good job, just keep up with your perfecting.
imagonner said...
on May. 19 2016 at 3:22 pm
imagonner, Loveland, Colorado
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&#039; its not about winning fist place in the race, its about finishing the race.&#039; don&#039;t forget who you are to me.

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also I have a more updated, meaning I added some things in, pending. hopefully it will be ready soon.
imagonner said...
on May. 19 2016 at 3:09 pm
imagonner, Loveland, Colorado
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&#039; its not about winning fist place in the race, its about finishing the race.&#039; don&#039;t forget who you are to me.

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@MoonBaby thx so much, this means a ton!!!! I really truly appreciate this. and yes I am adding more and more.... I will come check out your work, thanks again.
MoonBaby SILVER said...
on May. 19 2016 at 2:55 pm
MoonBaby SILVER, Idaho Falls, Idaho
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It&#039;s better to have it and not need it than to need it and not have it.

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I hope you continue this. The very first paragraph literally gave me chills. I am intrigued.
imagonner said...
on May. 19 2016 at 11:07 am
imagonner, Loveland, Colorado
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&#039; its not about winning fist place in the race, its about finishing the race.&#039; don&#039;t forget who you are to me.

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come on guys!! 30 people have seen this.... not one comment. if you are reading this, pls pls just read and comment...
imagonner said...
on May. 18 2016 at 7:53 pm
imagonner, Loveland, Colorado
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&#039; its not about winning fist place in the race, its about finishing the race.&#039; don&#039;t forget who you are to me.

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I know that this seems long and boring...... but pls just read.
imagonner said...
on May. 17 2016 at 12:55 pm
imagonner, Loveland, Colorado
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&#039; its not about winning fist place in the race, its about finishing the race.&#039; don&#039;t forget who you are to me.

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hey I have a more up to date version on this book, with more detailed parts, let me know if you want to read it, I will post it!!!
imagonner said...
on May. 17 2016 at 12:06 pm
imagonner, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&#039; its not about winning fist place in the race, its about finishing the race.&#039; don&#039;t forget who you are to me.

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pls read my book!! if you comment I will go ahead and check out your stories!!