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Desvania

May 1, 2014
By dabanis15, Sellersville, Pennsylvania
dabanis15, Sellersville, Pennsylvania
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on May. 8 2014 at 8:30 am
CNBono17 SILVER, Rural, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Lego ergo sum (Latin&mdash;I read, therefore, I am)<br /> The pen is mightier than the sword&mdash;unknown<br /> Don&#039;t let anyone look down on you because you are young, but set an example for believers in speech, in conduct, in love, in faith, and in purity&mdash;1 Timothy 4:12

Wow. Dramatic. Could have used a little more background, and you could've introduced the main character a little earlier. (Until you said his name was John, I couldn't tell it it was a boy or a girl). But the premise is good, and the story itself isn't bad:)