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Making You Mine...

March 22, 2012
By Renegade9891 BRONZE, Skipton, Other
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Renegade9891 BRONZE, Skipton, Other
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&quot;Keep calm and use your powers of reason.&quot;<br /> &quot;Get bored and shoot the wall.&quot;<br /> &quot;Ideas are like buses, they never come when you need them to.&quot;

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The ultimate combination of love, loss and Gothic betrayal. What happens when your taken away and forced into a competition. The winner will marry the vampire prince and everyone else - will die. Now I'm forced to fight against my best friend for a love I don't want but a life I want to keep.
He talked to me the prince and stared into my eyes.
"I could enlighten you with the promise I would die for you but no..." He paused. "I would kill for you and I am making you mine..."

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This book has 19 comments.

JustExisting BRONZE said...
on Nov. 26 2017 at 12:10 pm
JustExisting BRONZE, Franklinville, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am not a princess, I don&#039;t need saving. I am a queen, I got this shit handled.&quot;

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please write moreeeeeeeeeeee
candyfromhawaii said...
on Oct. 28 2016 at 3:10 pm
candyfromhawaii, Columbus, Georgia
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pepeto

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yes moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please
EstherC said...
on May. 19 2015 at 7:56 pm
EstherC, Rosharon, Texas
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I love this! You haveee to continue it.
The_Fantasy_Life said...
on May. 19 2015 at 2:03 pm
Amazing... You have NO choice, but to finish... PLEASE!!!
Cheshirekat SILVER said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 3:31 pm
Cheshirekat SILVER, Boise, Idaho
5 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;A friend might well be reckoned the masterpiece of nature.&rdquo; - Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &quot;Oh you can&#039;t avoid that; we&#039;re all mad here.&quot; - The Cheshire Cat

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Wow you have to finish this!
Cheshirekat SILVER said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 3:02 pm
Cheshirekat SILVER, Boise, Idaho
5 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;A friend might well be reckoned the masterpiece of nature.&rdquo; - Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &quot;Oh you can&#039;t avoid that; we&#039;re all mad here.&quot; - The Cheshire Cat

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The irony of this statment is killing me..
TheMuseEuterpe GOLD said...
on Apr. 28 2014 at 8:51 am
TheMuseEuterpe GOLD, Lafayette, Indiana
10 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writing is my oxygen. Music is my carbon dioxide. ~Jessica Bell

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You should right more, I really can't wait to see where this goes.
LostInStereo PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 11 2014 at 5:49 pm
LostInStereo PLATINUM, Phoenixville, Pennsylvania
26 articles 3 photos 18 comments

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Friends are the family you choose.

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The storyline is unique, which makes the story very entertaining. However, I agree with the other commenters when they say to check your grammar. Also, be sure to stay in the same tense throughout the entire story. I do the same thing when I write. I begin writing in past or present, and end up in the other. It helps immensely with the flow of the story if you are sure to stay in a single one. Also, it doesn't make sense if the story is in present tense one sentence, and past in the next. Good job, though! It really is a great idea P.s. I hope I helped somewhat :)
MissyStokes BRONZE said...
on Jan. 20 2014 at 6:43 pm
MissyStokes BRONZE, VIENNA, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fear is like happiness but the smile is wider

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*grammar, also please ignore the irony of these comments
MissyStokes BRONZE said...
on Jan. 20 2014 at 6:41 pm
MissyStokes BRONZE, VIENNA, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fear is like happiness but the smile is wider

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uniqueish idea, please continue and please check your grammer.
FallenAngel170198 GOLD said...
on Apr. 9 2013 at 9:15 am
FallenAngel170198 GOLD, Bundaberg, Other
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Write more please? :D this is awesome
Madcap_Mouse said...
on Nov. 28 2012 at 11:46 am
Madcap_Mouse, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
All Of Us Are In The Gutter But Some Of Us Are Looking Up At The Stars.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~Oscar Wilde

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this was realy good but id go through it againg and cheak your spelling and gramar.
RachelB2 said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 7:33 am
RachelB2, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
The world is your oyster

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"i kicked and trashed"

no, you didn't trash, you thrashed

RachelB2 said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 7:29 am
RachelB2, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Arizona
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The world is your oyster

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Hey Rachel here

great book and i actually think that it wasn't just cjrlotte using my accoung which she made for me...

FULLSTOP GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 5:09 am
FULLSTOP GOLD, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Other
13 articles 7 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
forever and ever and ever and ever will never be enough

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k btw Lou Lou i can't find ur orum. wassitcalled?
Renegade9891 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 4:52 am
Renegade9891 BRONZE, Skipton, Other
1 article 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep calm and use your powers of reason.&quot;<br /> &quot;Get bored and shoot the wall.&quot;<br /> &quot;Ideas are like buses, they never come when you need them to.&quot;

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kk, I'm a looking.
FULLSTOP GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 4:26 am
FULLSTOP GOLD, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Other
13 articles 7 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
forever and ever and ever and ever will never be enough

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actually, can you look at some of my work? 
FULLSTOP GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 4:25 am
FULLSTOP GOLD, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Other
13 articles 7 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
forever and ever and ever and ever will never be enough

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HI!!! annoying psycho here...

OKAY...

a) this is an AMMAZING BOOK

b) whilst it deserves comments, try this: comment on other people's work, and ask them to look at yours when they do. It works

Renegade9891 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 3:48 am
Renegade9891 BRONZE, Skipton, Other
1 article 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep calm and use your powers of reason.&quot;<br /> &quot;Get bored and shoot the wall.&quot;<br /> &quot;Ideas are like buses, they never come when you need them to.&quot;

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Hello, everyone. 

I would really appreciate it if you could all vote and comment. I would love comments even if they are negative. I, as a writer, still have LOADS to learn.

Thank you,