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Stuck in the Past
Summary:
Zoanna Blaine Teele is your everyday, ultra popular, supermodel-gorgeous sophomore in high school living in the 31st century. She counts on only three things in the world: Looks, money and fame.
One day, she is suddenly betrayed and stripped violently of those very things that make her who she is. Now, she is forced into participating in a mysterious Urgent Call Program that goes desperately wrong. Will Zoe complete her mission in time and discover herself along the way? Or will she be trapped in the Program…forever?
Vena Richards is one of the few students at TechBurrow High living off a full scholarship. Her plan: get through school without being noticed. Her strategy suddenly backfires when her path is crossed by the all-powerful Zoanna Teele, making Vena’s life miserable. Then, Zoe suddenly goes missing after being Called into one of the schools’ top-secret Programs. When Vena finds out vital information that could save Zoe, will she help? Or will she go along with the rest of the school and be glad Zoanna is gone?
Jillian H.
Stuck in the Past
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(Sorry it took me a long time to get back to you on the feedback for feedback thing.)
Okay, I have a bit of criticism.
1. People can get that Zoanna is spoiled without you having to beat them over the head about it. Trust in your readers; from the way she acts around her father, they'll get the point.
2. Paragraph more often. Huge chunks of writing cause readers to skip over your paragraphs, so try to make them a bit shorter.
That's about it, actually! I like the style of your writing and would be interested to see where this is going. Excellent work! :)
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WHERE. IS. THE. REST?
Seriously, this is REALLY good! I'm dying to know what happens next! :D!
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Favorite Quote:
"Crying? Nah. Lift you head up, princess. Your tiara is falling off."