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Temporary Commitment

May 17, 2019
By Anonymous

A quick process of elimination, the innocent and naive girl’s name bestowed and prominent.  A sly lick of his lips as he fantasizes about his next prey. He crept his way past the barriers of her mind, and suspended a web of lies. His smell enticed her, and made her dream of all things good. His laugh ricocheting through her veins, and his soft murmurs pretending to yield her heart. The atmosphere almost like heaven through the eyes of a gullible mind. A veil of darkness clouding his thoughts as he proclaimed his love for her. A phenomena of fake truths and I Love You’s.


Now distracted and misfortunate sits an oddly calm girl, who holds a hole in her heart. The sun now cascading into the moon, casting a spell. A spell of silence and hurt, her love and kindness taken advantage of. The endless opportunities weighs on her heart, as she silently falls apart.


The author's comments:

I wrote this piece as I was freshly experiencing my first heartbreak.


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