In “Lessons in Toilet Paper”, by Jackson L in the October issue, I felt he did a very good job describing his mishap. Jackson describes his experience in tee peeing with his friends as they “decorate their canvas”, as his grownup friend describes it. Jackson then realized what happened had misfired in the long run considering he knew the family.

In my opinion I feel Jackson could be my figure, the wild one that does fun things, and then feels bad for doing it. This is a really well written feedback piece because it states a life experience and it’s a non-fiction piece. I believe that this piece of writing deserves a thumbs up and gives helpful hints.