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Death Has Its Heart in the Right Place

March 14, 2009
By Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
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Looking down the barrel of a gun is a strange feeling, but after staring into Death's dark face so many times, Jack had become accustomed to the tickles and prickles that run across your spine. It had become a familiar, a common, an ordinary feeling. He almost liked it, the sensation, of Death looming about, waiting for the perfect moment to strike. To him, it was intoxicating. It made his heart race, his blood pump and adrenaline run. It was like being in love for the first time, and the last. Yet every time that the Reaper swung his scythe on the mob boss, he always seemed to stop, never finishing the job. It was as though he, Death, took pleasure in seeing Jack sweat under his blade. They both enjoyed the mad thrill, but it seemed that this would be the last time they would saviour it.
Bang! The thunderous roar of the gun shattered the calm night. It was over.
'Here. You can keep it,' the assassin tossed the smoking gun onto Jack's cold lap.
A sinister smile cut the killer's face. Raising his chin proudly, as a young boy does after winning a prize, the mercenary turned around slowly, savouring his victory. Now all he had to do was collect his pay and live comfortably on some exotic island for the rest of his life, without worries, without problems, without necessities, without ' Bang! A second shot.
The assassin's knees broke under the pain. One moment he was savouring glory and the next he was savouring the bitter sweet taste of warm steel, the killer kiss of a bullet. On all fours, he lifted his trembling hand up to his chest: his shirt was soaked in blood that was spewing out on both sides of his trunk. He was cold, weak, in pain. Frozen sweat poured down his face as his insides burnt in anguish.
Writhing on the floor with no strength at all, he turned around to see who the shooter was. Behind him, sitting in the same leather-cushion seat he had been sitting when the assassin came in, Jack sat. The only difference was that now his right arm was outstretched with his fingers curled around the gun. His eyelids were heavy upon his red eyes, but he still maintained them wide open.
'No ' Impossible ' I shot you ' I shot you in the heart.'
Jack licked his lips and explained slowly, enjoying every word, 'I am dextrocardi-ac.'


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Gloria B said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:59 pm
Keep on penning science boy!

El Dante said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:55 pm
Really cool stuff.

Mmddvv said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:54 pm
Excellent :)) !!!!!!!!!

Gabriel said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:50 pm
The dextrocardiac stuff is just great. Well done.

Pail said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:45 pm
...and spices too!

Sissy said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:44 pm
Amazing! Want to read more! It is full of flavour.

Miss MM said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:42 pm
Excellent work.

Sandy said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:30 pm
WOW! Cool Stuff!

Fenix1001 said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 1:56 pm
Fenix1001, Toronto, Other
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Excellent!

Big Boy said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 8:12 pm
Marvellous Ending. I can just imagine the face of the guy. What a momentum.

Fede Lel said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 6:49 pm
Make the most, enjoy the most, love the most and take care. Chance will always favor the prepared mind. You have what it takes.

Cesar Mil said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 6:45 pm
Perhaps this will lead biomedical studies or bioengeneering? Good material for a future clinical scientist. Go where your dreams will take you.

Bernardo H said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 6:42 pm
Getting ready for Anatomy? Looking forward to having you in class!

Illse said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 6:39 pm
Keep it rolling!

O'Coonor said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 6:38 pm
Ya! They are amazing, just read the two stories and watched the rest of their work. Well done!

the boss said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 6:19 pm
Fully agree. If they are the same kids that make the short video cartoons then I belive they are brother and sister.

Helen M said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 6:17 pm
Absolutely amazing. Any relation with Makena B who penned "Guilty Stains"? If so, the gift runs in the family. Congratulations.

Los Orozco said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 6:12 pm
Great pun with the words. Couldn't have chosen a better title. Loved it.

Cockita said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 6:05 pm
I fully agree. Keep it up.

Clary said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 5:03 pm
Excellent Scientific Thriller!