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Cicking

December 16, 2022
By Selina_lay061008 GOLD, Shenzhen, Other
Selina_lay061008 GOLD, Shenzhen, Other
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The forest with so silent and still, it was like a dead pool of water. There was no sign of wind, nor a sign of anything alive in here. Suddenly, there came noises of a weird ‘clicking’ sound, as if massive creatures with beaks were charging and closing in...


The author's comments:

---simile used: ‘like a dead pool of water’ indicates how there was complete, dead silence, an atmosphere so absent of sound, that tension was created.

---uses of verbs: ‘Charging and closing in’ instead of ‘moving’ or ‘running’. Which made the condition more dangerously and scarily, because the creations were not only moving but toward you, closing in upon you, make the ‘cliff’ higher, so the abrupt halt of the story could be more successful.


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