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The Water
I sit here on these stone steps, warmed by the summer sun, watching the water before me flow. It appears innocent as it caresses the small rocks and pebbles around it, but I can sense a deeply buried fury. It does not want to stay like this, tame and innocent. It wants to rise up and flood the hated stone. It wants to see the city blocks crumble beneath its raging strength.
But the prison walls are too strong, and the water polishes them as it tries to escape. The light glints prettily through the water, onto the rocks. The people around pay no heed to the hissing roar, do not fear the terrible beast that they themselves have created.
The water's thoughts are mad and incoherent, but it knows one thing with startling clarity. It knows that one day it will rise up and have its revenge. And one thing I know, is that it is right.
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wow, this is cool
i never thought of water like this, i really like this! it's personal but it makes you think of water with a whole different view point.
it describes water as calm and beautiful, but it also describes the water's dark side.
in a few words, GOOD JOB! LUV IT!
Kind of cool. You usually don't come across a piece completely based on personification, in fact I don't think I ever have before. But I think I like it, nice job. Your words choice was very good throughout, but I think at one point you could have used a better word than 'prettily', I'm thinking something like, 'with splendor' would work well. Anyway, nice job, keep writing, five starts!
Can toy comment and rate my piece, "Encounter"?