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The Crown

November 29, 2022
By Ashlee-Monroe SILVER, Caledonia, Michigan
Ashlee-Monroe SILVER, Caledonia, Michigan
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The Queen stood on her balcony, diamond tears spilling from her eyes, it was today that her only heir, her daughter, Princess Ren, had been kidnapped. The entire kingdom was on the search for the next Queen, but nobody had found any trace of her, she was gone. That night, the Queen had her nightgown on, prayed for her daughter's safe return, and got into bed. She had a vivid dream that night, her daughter was in a dark chasm with her tiara on her crown of raven black hair. The next morning, the Queen ordered a search for the dark chasm, but to no avail. The Crown that the Queen wears has a ruby red crystal gem in the very middle, which provides various assistance to the Queen to help run her kingdom. The Crown must’ve shown the Queen this scene! The Princess was gone, but was she? 

Princess Ren awoke to a dark figure standing over her. She stared in pure terror as the dark figure took her crown off of her dark raven hair and examined it. There was random junk all over the cave. Toys, nooses, knives, bullets, and other dangers. The princess shook, she was prepared for palace life, in the safety of her soldiers. But here she was, kidnapped, and nobody knew where she was. She had to survive on her own, with no help. Luckily, she had magic, in the royal family, each person got a magic ability. Princess Ren had the supreme power to control electricity and make it do whatever she wanted. The dark figure stood over her, and she extended her hand, willing the electricity inside her to electrocute her kidnapper. It worked, he was absolutely fried, she found the keys to her prison, and got out. The Princess’s crown provides assistance strengthening her power, but when she became Queen, the Queen’s Crown would provide less assistance strengthening her power, but more with diplomacy. By the time it was sundown, she was back home inside the palace, safe and sound. The royal family bloodline was safe and sound with the princess.


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I know this isn't good, but I thought I might as well get a little feedback on it.


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