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June 22, 2010
By my-own-life BRONZE, West Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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if we are so free why cant my reality be the same as my dream

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we see the roses grow in our yard bigger and bigger they get and together we help and we know that it is our love that grows to but then that day came i saw them bury you after that accident and a pile of our roses rested on your coffin and now the yard looks so bare and i cant help but to stare my bed is empty my heart is gone i loved you till the end and i still belive till death to us part

© Yisrawayl G., Philadelphia, PA

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this was made after i read a story about a couple that were gardeners and the family was shattered when a car accident killed the wife and the man continued to grow roses for his wife
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OfficialApprover PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2010 at 10:15 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker<br /> We cannot change the cards we&#039;re dealt just how we play the hand<br /> Experience is what you get when you didn&#039;t get what you wanted<br /> It&#039;s pretty easy to be smart when you&#039;re parroting smart people<br /> -Randy Pausch

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No problem, and thank you:)
my-own-life BRONZE said...
on Jul. 1 2010 at 10:09 pm
my-own-life BRONZE, West Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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if we are so free why cant my reality be the same as my dream

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thanks for the advice and sure
OfficialApprover PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 4:47 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker<br /> We cannot change the cards we&#039;re dealt just how we play the hand<br /> Experience is what you get when you didn&#039;t get what you wanted<br /> It&#039;s pretty easy to be smart when you&#039;re parroting smart people<br /> -Randy Pausch

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Aww, this was really sweet.  You wrote it very well, just try to put in periods and commas.  Great job.  Keep writing!

Btw, will you check out and comment on my work?