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The Beginning of Eternity

October 17, 2009
By eMiLyP GOLD, Jeannette, Pennsylvania
eMiLyP GOLD, Jeannette, Pennsylvania
13 articles 6 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is short; speak your mind, say what ya wanna say, and do what ya wanna do (as long as you don't get caught!).


Of course, this would happen to me. I mean, it's not every day that you get to walk through the woods with a hot guy. But of course it was not just a normal walk. It was weird. He was talking to his friend, (who I like to call Goth Dude) and I was walking by myself. Until I fell and hurt my leg, that is.

After that, Spencer told Goth Dude to keep going, and that he'd stay behind with me. He led me over to a tree stump, where we sat for awhile and talked.

"So what's your favorite band?" I asked. Randomly, of course. That was just my thing.

"Um, I like The Used and A Day To Remember a lot. You?" he asked me.

"Those are my favorites, too!" I responded.

"Really?" he asked. "You don't really strike me as the type that would like rock." He was smiling at me.

"Yeah. I get that a lot, actually." I informed, nodding.

We were quiet for a few more moments. I wondered what he was thinking about. I wondered if he was thinking about kissing me. 'Cus I was thinking that I wanted him to kiss me.

He must have been thinking about the same thing, because he said, "So..." That usually means that they don't really want to talk anymore, but don't know if you'd be okay with them kissing you.

"So..." I said, shifting so that my body was angled toward his.

I was looking into his eyes, and he was looking into mine, (God, that sounds mushy.) and something just... happened. It was like we knew what each other were thinking. He started leaning in closer, and I did, too. Our lips were probably an inch apart, and I could feel his breath caress my face. He lifted his palm to my face and pushed my hair back. I was being impatient, so I leaned in to close that inch of space between out mouths.

The kiss was sweet and gentle. He didn't try to shove his tongue down my throat, so that was a good sign. It was nice. Even with the lip ring. I've never kissed a guy with a lip ring before. It was... I don't know. Different, but in a good way.

We both pulled back at the same time and smiled at each other.

And that was the beginning of our eternity together. Now, ten years later, we are married and plan to be together for the rest of our lives. I owe it all to my clumsiness. Thank goodness for that.


The author's comments:
My best friend and I were writing a story together and this was a part I wrote in it. I altered it a little bit, but it was my favorite part, so I wanted to post it on here. Enjoy!

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lexi<3 GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 7:49 pm
lexi<3 GOLD, Spaulding, South Dakota
15 articles 7 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn&#039;t about waiting for the storm to pass, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

btw, nice screen name. and im not gonna yell at u bout ur spellin eithr. =)jk

lexi<3 GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 7:48 pm
lexi<3 GOLD, Spaulding, South Dakota
15 articles 7 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn&#039;t about waiting for the storm to pass, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

i kno! she was ttly flippin out!!!! i dnt think evn a michael jackson commercial wudda pulld her outta it. (and if ur some random ppl readin ths, thts BIG!!!!!!) lolz. =) dude, we gotta complain to th teenink ppl bout how slow theyre approvals r w/ ths. omg, i jst had a horrible thot. wat if thy dnt accept stories w/ slightly bad words in it?!?!?!?!?!?!? kuz thn thy wnt post sg!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 =( omgeeeeeee!!!!! now im gonna b all freakin out till thy post it!!!1 argh! (ya, i kno im dramatic. oh and sry if no one understands ths. its like wen ppl speak dif languages infront of you and it makes u thnk theyre talkin bout u. ugh. ttys!)

eMiLyP GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 7:08 pm
eMiLyP GOLD, Jeannette, Pennsylvania
13 articles 6 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is short; speak your mind, say what ya wanna say, and do what ya wanna do (as long as you don&#039;t get caught!).

i will! dnt worry!

pierceba said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 5:05 pm
pierceba, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments
EMY!! idk if i like this one or the other one more! there both extremely amazing!! write more!! <3

eMiLyP GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 1:51 pm
eMiLyP GOLD, Jeannette, Pennsylvania
13 articles 6 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is short; speak your mind, say what ya wanna say, and do what ya wanna do (as long as you don&#039;t get caught!).

Thanks! I would totally put the whole story on here if it was finished! I'll do my best!

eMiLyP GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 1:50 pm
eMiLyP GOLD, Jeannette, Pennsylvania
13 articles 6 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is short; speak your mind, say what ya wanna say, and do what ya wanna do (as long as you don&#039;t get caught!).

yeah! it was funny kuz th whole time she was like "aaaaw!"

lexi<3 GOLD said...
on Nov. 22 2009 at 2:40 pm
lexi<3 GOLD, Spaulding, South Dakota
15 articles 7 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn&#039;t about waiting for the storm to pass, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! i found u!!!!!!!!!! u wldnt tell me the name of your story you dork!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good thng i luvv u. =) lol. i knt believe u posted this!! yayayayay!! this is the part rae flipped out ovr wen she read innit?b (!!!) yayayayayayayayayay!!!!!!! im not gonna say keep writing, kuz duh, u will!!!!!!!!!!1 =)

on Nov. 21 2009 at 1:07 pm
This was really good. I would like to read the whole story if you ever felt like putting it on here.