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A deep secret part 2

October 7, 2009
By JustAGirlNextDoor SILVER, Peachland, North Carolina
JustAGirlNextDoor SILVER, Peachland, North Carolina
5 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think my favorite quote is <br /> &quot;Would you rather me tell you the truth and make you sad or lie and make you happy&quot;.


CHAPTER 2

I slowly opened my eyes and then closed them quickly. The sun was very bright.
I felt someone place there hand on my forehead. "Someone bring me some water" I heard from a distance. I wanted to say no but I guess that ball hit me in the head harder then I thought because I couldn't get the words out. All I could do was moan.
I heard a little voice say "Here you go Jake".
I opened my eyes then and tried to sit up but when I did that Andy ,who was the one who brought the water, tripped and the cup of water fell on me.
"Well that woke her up" I heard someone say in a smug voice.
I looked around and saw Madaline smiling a wicked smile.
I tried to sit up but I fell back down.
"Ow" I muttered, I felt someone grab the top of my arms and pull me up.
I looked up to see it was Jacob who had grabbed me. "Can you stand?" he asked.
I shook my head yes, he let go of me and I tried to stand straight. It wasn't immpossible but it hurt.
I looked at the little kids surrounding me and that's when I saw Andy.
He looked so sad that I knew in an instant that he was the one who had kicked the ball.
"Andy" I said quietly "I forgive you". The poor boy! he ran up to me and hugged me so hard I thought I wouldn't be able to breath.
"I-I'm so sorry Le--Leah" he whispered.
I patted his head "Its alright Andy it wasn't your fault" I said "What do I always tell you when accidents happen".
"The ball goes where it wants to" he whispered.
"Thats right" I told him "Go with the others and kick the soccer ball'.
Andy left and I turned back to Jacob, "Thanks" I told him.
He shook his head and went back to sit Madaline.
I let out a little sigh and ran my hands through my hair.
Jacob Wright held me ME ! in his arms, I let out a little shriek and went back to teaching the kids.
Hoping I would see Jacob tomorrow

(To be continued)



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on Oct. 28 2011 at 9:49 pm
snowanngel BRONZE, Branson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Your I will is more important than your IQ.&quot;<br /> &quot;You learn more from your failures than you do your accomplishments.&quot;

I like keep going!

on Sep. 11 2010 at 7:09 pm
JustAGirlNextDoor SILVER, Peachland, North Carolina
5 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think my favorite quote is <br /> &quot;Would you rather me tell you the truth and make you sad or lie and make you happy&quot;.

I'm writing it will be on soon

on Sep. 6 2010 at 3:03 pm
JustAGirlNextDoor SILVER, Peachland, North Carolina
5 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think my favorite quote is <br /> &quot;Would you rather me tell you the truth and make you sad or lie and make you happy&quot;.

I'll try soon

Lonleydandy said...
on Sep. 6 2010 at 2:55 pm
WHERE, may I ask, IS THE REST!?

on Aug. 8 2010 at 4:54 pm
Mandinova SILVER, Danville, Kentucky
6 articles 2 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Man performs and engenders so much more than he can or should have to bear. That&#039;s how he finds that he can bear anything. ~William Faulkner And &quot;When life gives you Lemons ... you squeze them in someones eye!&quot; yea i bet you just giggled a little

Please please write more!!!

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:51 pm
More, more, more, more, more please!

on Jul. 19 2010 at 6:58 pm
JustAGirlNextDoor SILVER, Peachland, North Carolina
5 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think my favorite quote is <br /> &quot;Would you rather me tell you the truth and make you sad or lie and make you happy&quot;.

thanks a bunch I really appreciate it!!!!!

on Jul. 18 2010 at 10:34 pm
Hope_is_everywhere BRONZE, Lone Grove, Oklahoma
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is the irresistible desire to be desired irresistibly.<br /> - Louis Ginsberg

I like it ALOT!!!!!!!!!!

on Jul. 14 2010 at 12:33 pm
JustAGirlNextDoor SILVER, Peachland, North Carolina
5 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think my favorite quote is <br /> &quot;Would you rather me tell you the truth and make you sad or lie and make you happy&quot;.

I'm sorry I haven't written more its just that I didn't think people actually liked it

on Jul. 10 2010 at 3:30 pm
Hope_is_everywhere BRONZE, Lone Grove, Oklahoma
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is the irresistible desire to be desired irresistibly.<br /> - Louis Ginsberg

when are you going to write more?

on May. 18 2010 at 10:58 pm
weebnini DIAMOND, San Diego, California
55 articles 3 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Done &amp; Over&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Anyone can give up, it&#039;s the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that&#039;s true strength.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;People should be able to say how they feel. How they really feel. Not, you know, some words that some strangers put in their mouth.&quot;

write more.... please? :) i like this story, it's cute!

lyrabear said...
on May. 2 2010 at 8:19 pm
i see what you mean i'll try to do better thanks

melone96 said...
on Apr. 4 2010 at 3:56 pm
melone96, White Sulphur Springs, West Virginia
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i liked the first one more...the cliff hanger u placed on the first was good but the chapter leading up 2 it wasn't as good...don't take it the wrong way, this was good but keep writing so i can keep reading more and more!

lyrabear said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 5:03 pm
thanks i'll try

on Dec. 16 2009 at 10:36 am
TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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ok lol as long as i get more hehe ur writing is really good though

lyrabear said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 5:14 pm
thanks i'll try

erika4964 said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 5:12 pm
This was a cute story it already has me wanting more. Keep writing!! ;)

lyrabear said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 4:27 pm
thanks im taking a break from it but i'll try

on Dec. 15 2009 at 10:34 am
TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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more i need more hurrry and right more lol

The Reader! said...
on Dec. 6 2009 at 1:43 pm
Great! Hopefully it's soon!