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Paragraph from my story

December 25, 2013
By mangawriter BRONZE, Highland Heights, Ohio
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&quot;If my friends think its weird, they are probably right.&quot; Me<br /> &quot;My ADHD side wondered what horrible thing you must have done in your life to get sewn into Hades&#039; underwear.&quot; Percy Jackson

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Avery stares at him in silence. Under the problem answers, is another drawing. This one is clearly of her, with the pale skin, and slightly ratty hair that Avery had today. The shirt, hair, eyes, and everything else was clearly her. Eli realized that she was looking at the picture and pulled it away, his face turning red.

© Laura B., Plainville, MA

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This is about Avery (Main character and Eli (an emo kid at Avery's school) and how they get paired up in math class. he has the answer and shows her the paper, and she sees a manga of herself.
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elycavill SILVER said...
on Feb. 1 2014 at 3:38 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
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I like the idea, and this line *Under the problem answers is another drawing.* it sounds as if it has another message , not only the physical description of the situation. And I love the name for the character 'Eli' :PP Nice :)