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In iggys world
"Who wants to play in my world?" Gazzy shouted through the living room. "Me!" Angel replied. "Ooh, ooh, I do!" from Nudge. "Sure, sounds fun." came from Max. a single shrug from Fang then I answered. "I guess so."
On my way over to the couch I tripped. "Max! I thought you were done moving furniture." I yelled. "It's bad enough that i have to count steps through the house without having to memorize new furniture patterns."
"Sorry Ig'. Kinda forgot to tell ya." i mumbled under my breath as i found a seat on the couch. "Okay lets get started."
"Gaz, you first. it ws your idea."
"Okay. In my world there is green but no blue. Fang, you next."
"Okay, in my world there has to be yellow but no black." i felt the couch shake with his shudder of mock horror."Max."
"In my world there is Gazzy but no gas. Angel."
"In my world there is green but no red. Nudge."
"In my world there is hopping but no pogo sticks. Iggy."
"In my world i can see, but thats just a fantasy." i said, got off the couch and launched myself out the window.
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This was very nice. The characters dispositions and personalities in this short were very similar to their ways in the books. I also liked how you added your own special twist in this story, as I recall there was no "in my world" game in the books. I also loved how you made Iggy the main character in this, because he is the one that is usually overlooked by the rest of the flock.
There were a couple of grammar/spelling mistakes I noticed
"a single shrug from Fang then I answered "I guess so."" (<-- the 'a' should be capitalized)
""Sorry Ig'. Kinda forgot to tell ya." i mumbled under my breath as i found a seat on the couch." (<-- both 'i's should be capitalized)
""In my world i can see, but that's just a fantasy."i said, got off the couch and launched myself out the window." (<-- both 'i's is this sentance need to be capitalized)
Can you check out my story, "Encounter"?
