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Say hi

May 13, 2015
By Alison Lucki SILVER, Aurora, Colorado
Alison Lucki SILVER, Aurora, Colorado
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You said hi. I  wish I knew why,  you didn’t say it for days after. I couldn’t wrap my head around it. And that one faithful day i opened my locker like normal and saw a note float to the floor like a feather. I picked it up and opened it. The first thing I see… blood running down the paper like tears ran down your face when I turned around. I looked down to see blood running down your forearms and thighs. Your last words to anyone was to me and all you said was “ All you had to do was say hi.”
All that was heard from that second was a crash and crack as your skull hit the tiled hallway floor. You left a pool of blood and a burden on me.



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HudaZav SILVER said...
on May. 13 2015 at 6:05 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible; the word itself says 'I'm possible'!" -Audrey Hepburn

I love this piece so much! Such beautiful and vivid descriptions. Youre an awesome writer, keep it up! :) PS Could you possibly give me feedback on my novel "The Art of Letting Go"? I'd appreciate it xx