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The Great Journey

October 3, 2013
By MFWin BRONZE, Kings Mountain, North Carolina
MFWin BRONZE, Kings Mountain, North Carolina
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Paul and George are in the park, they decide to race each other. They line up in a particular place in New York City Park and bet that one of them could beat the other. They line up in the front and start and take off into the day at a great speed. They were running in a straight line until there was this giant tree in the way and they both hit it.
They both got up and looked around and saw this guy who was running on the track. They saw him and decided to run after him because they thought they he was joining in the race. They caught up to him and went past laughing as they did. But he had something for them; he pulled out his rocket shoes and put them in overdrive.
He went flying past them and gave them the bird, but they pulled out then flamingo wings and put them on the shoulders and started to fly into the daylight. They saw him in the middle of the road just jogging along, and they pushed him in his buttocks and he went flying in the air. They then passed this guy named Tom sitting on a bench.
He waved and they passed him, but they did not know who Tom really was. He was a good runner who won the ring for fastest runner in the big booty run. They were chilling it and he came and so did Bob who had his speed pants on who was like lightning. They were almost at the finish line and they were all getting the best things they had.
Tom got his big booty shorts that were highly advanced for the running process. Everyone except Paul and George had things but they were all good runners and athletes. The competitive race was almost over, and Tom was way behind. He then caught up from picking up high speed and passed the finish line.
Tom won the race because he as not being as competitive as the others were trying to be. They wanted to win so bad that they forgot to have the fun it brings. The theme of the story is don’t doubt anyone who does not look like he has any talent. His talent was greater because he was not a very competitive guy.
Tom eventually died of a heart attack because he was a fairly old person who collapsed on his toilet. He was already buried in the park and had flowers right beside his grave.


The author's comments:
I came up with this in my head i decided to write it in a article.

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MFWin BRONZE said...
on Oct. 4 2013 at 11:14 am
MFWin BRONZE, Kings Mountain, North Carolina
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:3 thanks man

on Oct. 3 2013 at 8:56 pm
THATGUYBRANDON BRONZE, Kings Mountain, North Carolina
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LOL flamingo wings, good story