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My Favorite Spot

July 24, 2013
By SidLdaking BRONZE, Edison, New Jersey
SidLdaking BRONZE, Edison, New Jersey
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My Favorite Spot

Creak! Creak!
I peaked over the mossy bridge’s peak.
Swush! Swush!
Grassy green lily pads swam through the water with a rush.
Drip! Drip!
The velvety sheets of water leaked through my hand with a slip.
Slurp! Slurp!
I drank the pure clean water with a burp.
Sniff! Sniff!
I smelled the sweet aromas of the magenta pink flowers with a great big whiff.


The author's comments:
This poem describes the painting "Bridge over a Pond of Water Lilies" by Claude Monet

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RL@08817 said...
on Aug. 9 2013 at 3:29 pm
Nice, Poem. I like it.