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Dialogue

December 14, 2022
By Selina_lay061008 GOLD, Shenzhen, Other
Selina_lay061008 GOLD, Shenzhen, Other
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The woman laughed, a high, piercing laugh. ‘Ha, ha! You foolish humans, you want it for 'power beyond everyone?’ As if it could really bring you that power.’ ‘What, what do you mean by 'as if it could really bring you that power. It, it couldn't?’ He stammered.


The author's comments:

---contradiction of description of the actions of the two people. The woman is laughing a high, piercing laugh. And the man was stammering. Show that the woman was taking the initiative of the conversation, and the man was quite passive.

---verbs used: ‘stammered’ shows that he was confused, afraid and most important, astonished by what he had heard, so shocked that he couldn’t speak a full sentence well.


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