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The Diamond Fountain: Introduction
The Diamond Fountain, a source of unimaginable power. The Fountain, as it is sometimes referred to, has the power to grant immortality, if it so chooses. Many people have tried to find it: kings, knights, commoners and thieves, few have found it. The people who have found it, known as the Ageless, simply disappear, reappearing throughout time too warn of forthcoming danger and destruction. Now our story begins, a tale of adventure, horror and greed.
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Lets see- feedback, feedback, feedback...
The storyline so far seems like it's going to be pretty cliche, but lets see how original you can make it...
I'd start the story with some phrase other than 'the Diamond Foutain.' I think yuo shoudl describe it first, "magical" "covoted" and "celestial" might be some good words.
Other than that- pretty good. Not a bad pre-exposition.
Can you comment and rate my story, "Encounter"? It's a little bit longer, but I think you might like it :)
