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The Sinister Monster

December 15, 2021
By huskiez4lfie BRONZE, Watauga, Texas
huskiez4lfie BRONZE, Watauga, Texas
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Where'd he go? He was just here... "Check around the corner and be careful," commanded Colonel Jones. Slowly they peeked around the corner, and to their surprise, he was there, waiting for them. "HE'S HUGE!!" they yelled. This thing... is not human. Not one bit. Its face was red, filled with scars and blood vessels bubbling. It had long, tenticle-like arms with sharp, pointy claws at its ends and feet as big as a full-sized human! Its face reeked with hatred and terror. "What do we do, Colonel Jones?!?!" they screamed. "RUNNNNN!!" Bolting down the street they went. Suddenly, its legs grew longer and its arms could stretch 12 feet! "We don't have much time!" I shouted. AHHHH!!! There were corpses lying everywhere, screams from every direction. "RAWRRR, I'm HUNGRY," the monster cried. "You darn humans taking all the land from ME! Give me your jewels, too! I need to be stronger, RAWRRR!!!" "Send out the Fire Forces," Colonel Jones ordered. "But sir... that's our last resort..." I said panicking. "This is our last chance," he said. "Alright. Call for the Fire Forces!" "Got it," they said. Immediately, the experienced warriors came to their rescue. DASH! BOLT! SLASH! AGHH! "How dare you cut into my skin!!" it hollered. " "Where's Kanami Kuzi?" "He's just arrived." Out of nowhere a gigantic lightning bolt crashed right on top of the hideous creature. His screaches were so loud that they rang for miles. Kanami ruptured the creature's core at last. He then went for the final blow, slashing him open and shattering the jem inside it to pieces. "GAHH! You will pay for what you've just done!" FInally, the battle had been won, and the monster was slain, but it was far from the beginning of what was to come...


The author's comments:

This story is very action-packed and adventure filled. It also shows the ominous creatures that lurk on this "world."


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on Jan. 21 2022 at 8:31 am
ThespianChild, Carrollton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
You all have a gift, so use it. No one said it was going to be easy. - Tessa Reese :)

You have a great story line here, but try to add more and add spaces in between the dialogue like this:
"I don't understand." Jeff said to his teacher who was teaching with a perplexed look upon her face. "Well, think about it, if the dog crossed the road why didn't the chicken?"
"I don't know!"
"I told you to think, not answer!" (End) Notice that you hit the enter key when you are making them talk without interrupting with description. Be careful and don't use too much of this! Try to add more information to keep the story going at a smooth pace! :) You got this! Keep working!!!!!!!